...Feedback =)

..Just received my feedback from the 1st formative assessment.


Not to shabby so far... i prepared myself for the worst. So the fact i have 'passed' is wicked! I wasn't sure if they were gunna shock us into doing more work by failing us all...'treat em' mean to keep em' keen'

it says:

"Outline plan of work is progressive and includes relevant areas. We have an idea of what you are trying to achieve but are having trouble finding riddance of clear decisions on context and medium within your work.
There are origins of good ideas but you need to introduce a fresh approach to your design. Your decisions on proportion are suspect and lack of sophistication that can be easily added to your studies.
Your toile feels too rushed and ignores the core issues that you need to address. No evidence of progress with your website and overall market development. You have the makings of a very strong idea, please stay focused in clarifying exactly what it is your trying to say and what makes it different from what already exists within the context of fashion marketing.''

xoxo